All Comments on 'A Photographer's Erotic Fantasy Journey'

by justboycrazy

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Thrilling story!

Kristy is her name. As the main character in this erotic fantasy she starts out filming an Italian Stud, ends up making out. Oh, the life of a female Photographer. To bad we can't all go out and buy the Premiere issue and pursue this ongoing fantasy together. A very enjoyable read as well as being hot. What more could we readers ask for?

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Good debut

A little short, but certainly full of action. Maybe on their next assignment, Wendy could join in (in fact, seeing as Wendy was standing there throughout, why didn't she grab any "private" pix?). Look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A winner

Hello Justboycrazy,

This being your first (story, that is), you must be awefully proud. You were "focused". Wish you had given it a wider focus to include all three at some point or a bit more "oral". Keep up the good writing.

MrKnowitallMrKnowitallover 17 years ago
Impressed

Great job for a first story. Draw it out a little more and throw in a few more details and you'll make it even hotter. Good luck and keep writing.

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