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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
lame

totally unrealistic and pathetic. I would sue the club for that shit.

hellraiser69hellraiser69over 17 years ago
How

Could any male in their right mind. Watch a other guy have sex with his wife. I just don't understand how that could turn a person on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
THIS DOG DON'T HUNT #24

This is really poor! It fails dismally because it does not bare the slightest semblance to reality.It is a pity because so much hard work went into writing.Perhaps, the fundamental problem is that this belongs in a different category such as bdsm?Those type of folks who wish to be humiliated and hurt, might like it.As it stands, there is not enough supporting detail to make his ideas come alive for the reader.This,definitely,is not the stuff that dreams are made of.Perhaps, the author might enjoy reading THE STORY OF O or EYES WIDE SHUT (available in script form on-line) before his next endeavor.

rick123rick123over 17 years ago
Good Story

This was a great story. I hope you write another.

NefricNefricover 17 years ago
not a good story

You definately have no idea of why a man wants to share his wife with other or of the power exchange between a dominate wife and a cockold.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved it!

There are just as many men and women who like or fantasize about this type of sexual situation as those who don't. It's is not up to those who don't to pass judgement on those who might find these situations stimualting or erotic. If you don't like reading such stories may be you should read any stories on this web site. Just continue your mundain existence with no imagination or out of the orindary experiences and keep thinking like someone else told you should.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I do not get it!

You introduced the story one of a swinging couples but then it turns into a bdsm type story. Perhaps Nefric can write a more realistic story.

SleeplessinMD

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Another Cuckster From A British Colony

What is this - Invasion of the Cucksters - matie???

Doesn't your wife get pissed with you watching her cocks all the time - have you no respect for her??? Hmmm! I guess that would be fair as she couldn't possibly have any for you wimpo.

I'm guessing Montreal cuckster cuz on Prince Edward Island they would stake you out for the polar bares to munch on.

More and more self cuckstering writers seem to be from a colony or their fatherland - evidently a genetic trait from the old country where the woman loved their wimps but not exclusively by the wimps request to watch larger cocks.

What say you "feetsup&smalldongdown" ? Heritage or just warped male little weiner?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
nope

Swing clubs to not conduct their affairs in anything remotely approaching this manner. Sure there are egos, but believe it or not, liability is a real concern.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Nice hot story but confused by mixup in wife's names. Cynthia or Shelly?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Magnificent!!!!

Erotic, well-observed and had me jerking off from the get go!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good story

I really enjoyed this story. Believe it or not, some men do enjoy the fantasy of being dominated and the thought of having their girl taken by another man. Having it happen in real life is a different story, but people are allowed to have fantasies. Well done and hopefully you write more of the same

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I actually enjoyed this story. Bravo

desperate1desperate1about 11 years ago
great!

All those who dont believe a man can have such an exciting time are sooo wrong I am living proof of it happening and I can tell you that fucking a spunked up cunt or sucking one is one of the best sex experiences you can have

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Never the same

That's for sure. Your slut wife has demonstrated her total lack of respect for you. Unless you've developed a taste for abusive humiliation and the chance to catch something you don't want, it's time to divorce the cheating wife and move on. Who needs to be treated as an object?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm glad

I'm glad I live in a place that allows gun ownership.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
This is a Work of Shit

Take your slut for a VD check fuckwit

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What was good about this mess?

That they undoubtably caught a disease? That they were thoroughly unlikeable characters doing things that were so out of character that it made me laugh? That there was nothing worthwhile about this? Just plain awful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved it.

A bit ridiculous but a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The same one key flaw as every other blackmail story

Blackmail is a serious criminal offence. Forcible confinement is an even more serious criminal offence. The perpetrators were stupid enough to record video of their crimes. All it takes is one person - maybe the small-prick ambulance chasing attorney standing ignored in the back row - to make one call to the police and it's all over.

There's one key flaw in all of these "blackmail as means to obtain sexual favours" stories. The perpetrators will record that sexual activity too and use it for more blackmail. The victims know this. The victims therefore have less to lose by going to lawyers and police immediately than they have to lose by allowing the blackmail to continue. As soon as one victim sees this, the whole tapestry begins to unravel.

There needs to be a sequel to this tale, describing in explicit sexual detail what happens to the perpetrators of this scheme once they go to prison and drop the soap. That sequel doesn't belong in the "BDSM" section as it won't meet the minimum standard of "safe, sane, consensual" (SSC) generally upheld by the BDSM community, but it might be a good fit for "non-consent" or "erotic horror" with the rest of the violent crime.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
brilliant

the knockers want to get out more, i went to a club with my wife and we were having a good time, when this couple pinned my wife to the wall, the woman kissed, fondles, played and then went down on her while the husband held her hands, others looked at me and her, one of the crowd, female started to fondle my dick through my pants, next the husband is sucking her tits and making her keep her hands wide not holding them, it is all very erotic, the wife stands and kisses my wife again and her husband is now in her cunt, im not totally sure, he could be, the apmosphere is electric, now im sure he is fucking my wife, his wife comes over to me, gets my cock out, fuck im close to coming, another guy takes over from the husband, his wife is wanking me, i need to come, my wife is getting gangbanged, she licks my cock, a third guy is fucking my wife, i spunk, i never got to fuck his wife, i guess it is a game they play...... it happens lol

no one felt like pulling a gun out lol i can see how lust makes you behave crazy! great story loved it xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
2 stars

I didn't care for it, and I enjoy cuckolding stories, but there was nothing erotic or realistic about this. I can see the husbands getting together and having the owners prosecuted, or, since this is a work of fiction, returning to the scene of the crime armed to the hilt and taking out the thugs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
How....

Could a Wife do that to her Husband?? She must really despise him & have no respect for their marriage to act like a real slag & enjoy humiliating him - untold amounts of cum from unclean cocks having been in lots of sweaty pissy cunts even pooey back passages Yeuk - I hope he doesnt touch it with a 10ft barge pole or he too will die of a rabid std

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It sucked, just like you do, faggot!

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Withyourfeetup and your head in the shitter, you wrote another story about a whorewife and her cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The worst of the worst... the author knows nothing of women's preference of penis size. Large ones are uncomfortable and even cause damage..... Typical writing for people with warped sense of reality. 80% of women are happy with the average 5 and half inch penis.

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