All Comments on 'Waking From a Dream'

it was pretty good considering that it was your first story here and the ending with the roommate had me giggling. Anyway next time try to go deeper with the story and give the characters some more depth.

When you're reading it you get the feeling that something's missing and feels a bit hollow...kinda like a regular fuckstory!

But overall it was pretty good

a few misspelled words but the concept was good. For a stroke story it wasn't bad, but I would have liked to know what was in the dream and how she woke...etc...you know, back story. The stuff that makes a person feel they are part of the story.