All Comments on 'At Your Feet'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
adored

Your smile ~ the touch of your hands ~ the sound of your voice only reaffirms in my heart ~ that I'm yours body and soul. The illustration selected seem to be a bit mystical to me.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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One's submission so artistically portrayed, in better and clearer terms that the illustration.

BellatrixieBellatrixieover 12 years ago
So beautiful....

This is so beautiful and speaks to me so clearly.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
AT ONES FEET

why are you kneeling O subservient one. TK U MLJ LV NV

roc1knightroc1knightabout 4 years ago

The rhythm is dull. But "My cheek warm upon your firm thigh" is good, and we can guess what she was kissing.

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