All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 03: Alex'

story about the origins of the Djinns.

An excellent addition to the chain.

Black Tulip

been mentioned as a guest review in the New Story Review Thread in the Authors Hangout. (Wonderful work Tseranc)

A solid take on the real lore, modified so that it sets Laresa apart in her own mythology - excellent!

Tseranc:

By your willingness to tell a great tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I love the fact you gave our Laresa a past and a well-told one too. Great job and an excellent first story on Lit. :D

I loved this chapter of the story...I've been waiting since my fave author wrote the 2nd chapter, but this latest edition is fantastic! Thanks!

Very, very good and imaginative. I really liked it. I would point out, though, that tuxedos do not have buttons (especially at the level of president), they have studs.

Also, in the third paragraph, it should be "other than" not "other then."

Very imaginative concept for the creation of Laresa...I loved the history behind it...