All Comments on 'A Blackmail Tale Ch. 01'

My first time was with a southern woman. Just that I was 17 and she was 43. The story was great. Details were tastefully described. Looking forward to the next chapter with the movies as the blackmail.

Enjoyed your story and looking forward to pt 2.

Krista reminds me of a southern girl I had met a long time ago and she gave me her first blow job also. She was good but not as good as Ktista.

May I will write about her too,

Sam

I like to keep them coming back!

I loved it! You did exactly like I would have done by making that movie for future action with her under threat of blackmail! I am looking forward to the continuation(s) on this story, perhaps you can also "accidently" knock her up?

Your story has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

I read part 2 1st.,then came looking for the 1st. one and hope there's more.I am not much on judging the writing of others,but your detail of the whole story is great got me hot as hell,as i said i hope there are more.

Can't wait for the second part.

Second part here I cum!

4 stars, i just dont like that he's gunna blackmail her again

blackmail her some more-- I really like the way your story is going.

This story was very hot in a sensual kinda way. Keep writing. Can't wait to read the other chapters. Please don't let haters discourage u from writing.

I like the outline of the story and how it is handled. Not to slow, not to fast. Good follow through. Just what we read erotic literature for....Some thing sexy.....lol

It's a good start.

Well played, never trust someone who blackmailed you. As she will find out.

From Madmen, Don Draper to Pete Cambell, "If the information you have is so incriminating that you think I will do what you want. Then you should consider what I would do to you to keep that information private".

Can't wait for the next part.

thanks for posting!

Amazingly hot sex scene in the next one!

beautifully written, very erotic, and very explicit. glad to see that you wrote this a long time ago, so I can read all of the chapters without waiting for you to finish the "saga"

Very spicy and almost every man's dream scene. Just shows that we must always plan ahead. Pls keep writing.

I honestly think that if you played your cards right by contacting the correct person in charge of sales at a popular home security company, you could sell this series and they could offer it as an incentive. Confidentially, of course. I know of what I suggest

will work for mutual profits.

That's why she shouldn't have given in to the blackmail. Who could trust a blackmailer?

Look at what he said: "I can't get those images of you out of my mind. I think about you all the time. I want you so bad I ache. I want to hold you, feel you, touch you, kiss you, taste you. I just can't stand it anymore." - Does THAT sound like someone who is going to stop?

Not sure if I'll continue reading. Why do the majority of your main male characters have to be complete losers?

Great story.

Simular thing happened to 3 of my buddies and I where a friend of our we thought was a friend had seen our wives skinny dipping in an old swimming hole we used while we were in high school. He took pictures and videos with out them knowing and blackmailed them. When he approached my wife she refused him and imediantly told me.. He happened to be out of town the next 2 days. My buddies and I broke into his house and took any thing we could find smashed his computer tv bond other electronics. Took other items so it didn't look other than a normal break in. He must have got scared left his job there to transfer to another city with same company with less pay. Some of us would now and then slipped over to pay his house or his car or truck a visit. A lot of fun.

Terrific story. Well written, very exciting.

Great story. About 55 yrs ago, I worked the third shift at GM and slept days, while my wife (whose sex drive evaporated as fast as the carrier in the ink on our marriage license) worked days at Bausch and Lomb. We had two kids, one three, one a year and a half old so we hired the girl who lived downstairs to babysit them while I slept during the day. She was married and her husband was a long haul trucker so he'd be gone for two weeks, come home for two or three days and then be gone again. His wife had a fine set of tits on her and a great ass... and she dressed in clothes tight enough to advertise both. It wasn't long before I had her in bed 'babying' me. She was constantly worried about getting pregnant because I always fucked her bareback and gave her the full charge. I had great control and stamina so I could fuck her into oblivion. She'd come five or six times before I coated the walls of her pussy with a heavy layer of pussy paint. She'd whine about me coming in her but then start licking and sucking my cock to get me hard so I could fuck her again. Damned if she didn't get pregnant. Her husband was the happiest guy in the world when she told him that HE was going to be a daddy. He was happy again right after she had 'their' son when she told him that she was pregnant again. Two months before she was due, something happened in his family that caused them to move to his home state. I lost a sweet lover and a fine piece of ass but she hooked me up with a friend of hers before they left. Damned if she didn't get pregnant, too.

it always amazes me when they do something worse than what they are being blackmailed with but great story

What a dastardly trick! But of course that's the whole point of this series.

Bad Bad Boy! For shame!

Can't wait to read the next!

I love your writing

Wow that’s all I can say 5stars

Femdom agitprop is best and all, but… Not really blackmail though, which is why I came here.

adding his wife to the picture is a lovely tease, foreshadowing nice things to cum.

One of my favorite sex stories of all time. I have probably read this one 20 times and it still gets me going! Thanks!