Has very good elements but was VERY choppy/lacked smooth flow. I had to work hard to keep track of where I was and who was doing what. But the basic story elements, characters and dialog are good.
keep up the good work
Sexy Goddess has gotten me completely aroused with her vivid words!
what a wonderful woman!
An amusing story about a mature woman chasing a younger man. A
lighthearted sexual romp ensues to the great pleasure of both parties. Fun Read!
wish i was doing all this with the author. email@example.com I especially like anal
I liked the story but losing track of the older girls and swapping them in the middle seemed a littl OTT. If it hadn't been for that I would have gone for full approval.
I enjoyed reading your story. It brought back memories of my ex wife. I was ten years younger then her when we met and first fucked. We fucked every way that we could, missionary style, dogie style, oral, anal, and of course 69. We enjoyed sex in every position, and way, and any where we could. Anything went for us. I loved having sex with that woman. She was just like your heroine. Sexy. I'm 74 now, and I do miss that woman.
Thanks for the memories.
I couldn't help but smile through the whole story! It was great! I loved the point/counterpoint of their dialog...and I haven't heard the word 'ABSOFUCKINgLUTELY' in a long time! Great story!
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