All Comments on 'Cruise to Alaska Day 06'

I wished that was true it would be a #1 hit story with me Tom should marry Linda then all of them could get it on every night together.

Atlanta,Ga

Firstly, you should have gone to a french translator before you put your nomme de plume up on here, for all the world to see that you are an illiterate prat! Secondly, you should remember who is talking about whom in the dialogue; calling Linda Emile is destructive to the flow. Thirdly, your hero's name is Tom, not Dave. And finally, you should proof-read your writing, or get somone else to do it for you before you post. Apart from all that, the story line was fun, so thank you. Cheers.

I think the Cruise to Alaska stories are fantastic... If I were looking for perfect proof reading I wouldn't be looking at this site. I for one am greatful for the stories the authors "give" us here. I did notice the "Dave" but who the hell cares, you know who he ment, get over it. Keep it up LaPatitMort (no pun intended) You make me hot and that makes my MAN very happy. LaPatitMort? (gotta look that one up to see what bloody's problem is with that.

Now, THAT, Ladies and Gen'men is a class act!

Loved how you seduced Emile and then with her mpm

hope you can add more part to this story bring the family together, a wedding..

Wow..well i read up to 5 and passed out.. lol that more than anything is an indication of how incredibly hot this story was..amazing..!!

Only minor issue: typos..but apart from that..amazing..!!

Very good writing and a great snapshot of how to enjoy the ladies

This is a great 5 star story but leaves you wanting more. Be sure to read the conclusion to this love story "Getting Linda Pregnant" for the great happily ever after ending.