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Wolf's Bane Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/17/06

Hmmmmmmm

Since I haven't read 1-3 I will say this one is interesting. However, I must say not just one pres messed up Reagon's plans for the US. But otherwise this part was fairly good. I'll have to go and look up parts 1-3.

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by Anonymous09/17/06

interesting..

ok.. ive read the others and i have to say that .. this chapter seems a lil off.. then the others.. i duno.. write more then it might come together more..

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by Anonymous09/18/06

its ok

i am the old fan from the genesis

well, there is suspense in here, and mystery:)
some spelling mistakes, but it's alright. i am looking forawrd to wat happens next in this chapter and in geensis chp 20
lw

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by Anonymous03/03/07

more please!!

i loved it. its something i can really get into. i need more, im hooked already.

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by Anonymous07/04/10

ENDING???

Another story with no ending,why write if you can't finish the story.

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by Anonymous07/28/11

ok did you die or quit

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by Anonymous10/25/11

what happens next?

Now you have me on the edge of my seat with all these hints about what is happening in Fox Hollow. Especially with those three girls from the mall. I assume they are the same ones who saw William carry Tess to school?

Please write more of this awesome story!

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by sweetie8612/01/11

UGH!!!!

NO FAIR..... DON'T BAIT ME IN AND THROW THE FISHING POLE IN THE POND.... FINISH PLEASE!!!!!

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by Anonymous12/09/12

So what happens next?

I hope that you have nor dies or something to have taken so long to finish.

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by countrygirlfla07/14/13

Unfinished,,another one..

Well,a good story,,what there was of it,,,just add it to the list of UNFINISHED stories on here,,such a waste of readers time,but,unfinished is getting to be the normal on here anymore...

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by dliter08/13/13

Nuts, another unfinished story!

I am getting so tired of reading a story that is really good to only find out it is unfinished and likely will never be finished! Have to start reading from the last chapter instead of the first just to find out if it is finished from now on!

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by Anonymous08/17/13

another unfinished story

pretty good bbut unfinished...there are a lot of stories on literotica that are good but unfinished./...there should be some kind of mark that a person could see that would tell the reader that the story was finished,,hopefully!!!!!!

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