by bbkradwell
Spelling mistakes, not even the least bit arousing, and language that didn't even fit in to the situation. This story has potential, but you need to brush up on your skills before attempting it agian.
Spelling mistakes? Dude, I know what you were saying, BB! I understood, completely, the sentiments you were trying to convey to us, your readers. And I, for one, appreciate them.
This story was very heart-felt and almost romantic. The humourous touches also made me laugh (or should I say, "LAFF!") LOL!
Anyway, BB, please continue with your writing and I will most assuredly, continue to read everything you submit to this website!
Thank you again.