All Comments on 'Lisa Lets Go'

Oh no !! The story ended ...... You must continue this hot adventure .

i think you are an artful and imaginetive writter .

More please!

As Lisa lay now, spread like a buffet

While your story is a little dark and deviant, and your writing style somewhat unique, it is certainly good enough for you to be CONFIDENT in what you do. A good writer on Literotica once said to his/her critics, "I write to please myself, you should read to please yourself. If my story isn't your pleasure, STOP READING." You simply cannot let ignorant people anonymously stop you from doing what you enjoy!!! And I agree with your observation, the harshest critics have written nothing!! STAY STRONG MY WRITER FRIEND!!