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The yin & yang of picking up

Hitch hikers;

She's so much fun

But with a gun

The naked fun turns chilly!

We ARE moving up (relatively speaking). It’s not so much a heavily clichéd poem as the previous one was. Rather, this one is improbable (even as a fantasy) and mean spirited. I mean, if her “orgasm song” was a fake, why did she bother? He gave her a lift and she repays him by stripping him from all his possessions - how romantic! This is not a bank (see “Bonnie and Clyde”), nor an abusive husband (see “Thelma and Louise”). Apparently, this is just the “Ying and Yang” of mean spiritedness.