All Comments on 'Choices'

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit

With this light little piece

Surely worth a giggle!

Nicely Parkerish... a hint of meter and wit. Well done.

Another rsum

which to choose, TK U MLJ LV NV

Dafuq? Fun little ditty. :-)

Partners get boring; -- banal (but harmless)

I get lost in a crowd; -- cliched

Drunks end up snoring; -- banal; drunks+snore? work harder at poetry;

Screamers are too loud; -- ditto;

Critters aren't legal; -- somewhat interesting language;

Teens tend to swell a bit; -- unclear (hence not too useful) but harmless;

I ache when spread-eagle; -- graphic (and a bit of a cliche; but where is poetry?)

Think I'll stay celibate. -- a transparent attempt at humor, not original, not really funny.

You seem to have an ok brain. Use it, use it way harder. Peace.