All Comments on 'Joel and Carrie Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome

More, more! I love this story, great job! Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome! I hope you continue with this...

So far this story has been great and I really hope you will continue it and add many more chapters! Keep going!!!

FunkydrummerFunkydrummeralmost 17 years ago
Waatsh yer speeling, pleez

A hot story but the spelling errors took me out of it at points. "Lust filed gaze" made me snicker. Other than that, a great series. Looking forward to more.

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