by MALIBUMAN666
His ordeal with the dildos could have been more detailed. That usually is the best part when it's done right. Her taunting him inbetween strokes demanding he answers her no matter how hard she fucks him for example.
His incoherent speech as he tries to abide by her wishes to be quiet only to once again start whimpering from the pain she's inflicting on him.
I really enjoyed the first 4 chapters.... and this one was pretty good.. But I'm starting to feel that it's going to far... the bdsm romance is dying...