All Comments on 'Sex in the Woods'

by kinkidusti

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ungenderlessungenderlessover 17 years ago
Memorable!

You have a gift for writing detailed descriptions that are actually fun to read. Tastes, scents...things that I don't normally about in erotica. Also, the build-up has just enough humor to keep things interesting without becoming too corny. When the sex scene finally happens, it's raw and brutal. This is a very memorable story.

ajiowaajiowaover 17 years ago
fantastic writing

Your characters were very believable. Great Job! Very Hot Story!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Fun Read!

College students meet as Cowgirl and Cowboy at a Halloween fest. A walk in the woods, turns out to be a walk on the wild side. Terrific Read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good build up, Weak ending.

Your narative style is good, you use words well, try think of a diferent sort of ending.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Thanks

You're story has been mentioned on the review thread, found in the Author's Hangout forum on Lit's bulletin board. ~ Thanks, Red

sacksackover 17 years ago
thanks for sharing this gem!

No, it's not overly ambitious or spectacular, just a good read. Good luck in the contest!

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