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Duces wild

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by Anonymous

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by Tristesse210/03/06

I like this erotica

there isn't enough of this sly,subtle stuff out there.
Thanks boue.

Tess

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by lobomao10/04/06

•) Delicous!!!

so in on waking
more than the welcome smell of bacon
to find the seeds of dreams planted here
tenderly by a master gardener
surprising me with her blooms
such is her art
a grateful smile in bed

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by LeBroz10/05/06

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Watch them fingers
Playing where they ought not go...

All that's left to wonder is
What the deuce are duces?

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by My Erotic Trail10/05/06

playfully erotic

Duces wild~ I had to read it several times for the pure enjoyment... a very good poem from out of the blue~ (~_~)

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by sack10/09/06

excellent!!

only the word "paw" seems out of place, all I can could think of was a big dumb bear..destroyed the mood for me!

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