All Comments on 'Educating Alex Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Solid stuff.

Nice work. However, it lacks development. The plot transitions from classroom lecture to sex on the teacher's desk. A more hesitant connection would heighten the suspense and yield a better result.

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