All Comments on 'Unfolding Ch. 05'

As always, nothing but the best for your readers! I've been waiting for Chapter 5 ever since I read Chapter 4!

Wow. Just when I thought you couldn't get any hotter, you crank it up a couple of notches. Great tension, woman! You've left me sitting in my office with a raging hard-on and now I can't stand up. Nice work!

Not only is this another great addition to a great storyline but, even better--

Selena is BACK!!!

it thought they were getting *really* clean, I mean, the bathtub and all.

Maharat

Another great story. Thanks...

A+, sweetie! And thank you!

But, dear Lord, why could you not record THIS one?!?!?!

Desparately yours,

---bananahead

your writing is excellent. excellent stories with great sex scenes. I hope to see more of your stuff soon.

Wow, that was....well, that almost got me in serious trouble for stroking myself at work. But I couldn't fucking help it! Christ, I am so horny now.

fabulous stuff, torrid, well written, technically excellent. thanks for the hard work.

very hot, ms. kittyn, very hot indeed

Try them on your Hubby nest time. You'll be amazed at the results. My wife almost drowned but turn about is fair play.

that was awesome. i want more!

Your description takes me there, like all of your stories. I can only imagine that you have tried them yourself, but if you haven't, you should!

I am so turned on I can't stand it. Kind of like having my fantasies come to life through your characters. Maybe it will be my turn next!

you have me so wet now

please keep up the great stories

I had such a great orgasm reading this that I broke the computer chair, So hot and so real, must get my husband to read it.

The beads were a really nice touch. Haven't tried them myself, but am rushing out to buy a set. But the best part is Jack setting the whole thing up to surprise and delight his wife.

You must enjoy the thought of your writing touching so many people's lives, thinking how each interprets the story according to his or her own fantasies and relationships. One idea that occurs to me is that you legitimize taboo activity for couples, giving them permission to experiment. The nice thing is that it works to deepen and enhance a relationship. Thanks for all your stories.

from 'The Godfather'

Loved the tenderness along with the beads, what an orgasm

fantastic story. truly loved the rimming scene. more rimming please it got me so hot

Thank you Selena. I was looking for a hot little distraction and your story was definately that. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

My husband and I had fun re enacting some of these scenes.

Except for the Lloyd part...

Sooo loved it. Thanks Miss Kitty for the best cum we ever had...so far that is..lol.

My husband and I had fun re enacting some of these scenes.

Except for the Lloyd part...

Sooo loved it. Thanks Miss Kitty for the best cum we ever had...so far that is..lol.

hot

That shot was so fuckn hot I even came on my self whit out even I came so hot........

Danny portillo im so gay that my bf never fuck me like that so for me it felt sexy enuff that I might tell him 2 dod that 2 me

Really, really hot story. Love the descriptons of the action!

This was one of the best written pieces of erotica i've ever read. Sooo sexy.

Artfully written, lovely Selena! You had me thoroughly entrapped within the steaming coils of your prose. Then you had your way with me, the best way to be had.

Excellent. Thank you.

I loved the story. I really enjoy anal sex with a woman and you made me feel like I was there! Great images, very descriptive, great story and action. Keep up the good work.

Good job on your writing. My wife also resisted anal sex. She now requests it. She (and I'm sure you also) does not understand why she waited and resisted so long. Keep the stories coming.

My girl didn't until the whole finger while picker her pussy. think she would like i until I licked her little rose bud. Then fingertips while I teased her clit. It wasn't long before my cock was buried in that tight canal

. Now its part of our whole lovemaking. Every couple should allow themselves the joy of anal. We even let her strap one on to tickle my prostate now while I get a complete reacharound.

liked your choice of words

Love the detail and subject matter :D

Perhaps the only thing missing from your stories is how you gave your butt the enemas, and subsequent flushing, necessary to have anal sex the way you do. That act in itself would be sexy, the way you write so definitively. I love your ass the way Jack does, as you describe. What great imaginative writing! I will endeavor to read all of your stories/submissions. Touche mon cher.