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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/10/06

Once again ....

As always, nothing but the best for your readers! I've been waiting for Chapter 5 ever since I read Chapter 4!

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by jjadler10/10/06

That does it.

Wow. Just when I thought you couldn't get any hotter, you crank it up a couple of notches. Great tension, woman! You've left me sitting in my office with a raging hard-on and now I can't stand up. Nice work!

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by Anonymous10/10/06

Whew! Awful Hot In Here For October!

Not only is this another great addition to a great storyline but, even better--

Selena is BACK!!!

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by Anonymous10/11/06

that was very hot, butt

it thought they were getting *really* clean, I mean, the bathtub and all.

Maharat

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by Anonymous10/12/06

5 every time

Another great story. Thanks...

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by Anonymous10/17/06

Good G-d!

A+, sweetie! And thank you!

But, dear Lord, why could you not record THIS one?!?!?!

Desparately yours,

---bananahead

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by Anonymous10/23/06

just great

your writing is excellent. excellent stories with great sex scenes. I hope to see more of your stuff soon.

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by Laetor10/30/06

Jesus, this is hot.

Wow, that was....well, that almost got me in serious trouble for stroking myself at work. But I couldn't fucking help it! Christ, I am so horny now.

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by TheScribe10/30/06

first rate

fabulous stuff, torrid, well written, technically excellent. thanks for the hard work.

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by Anonymous10/31/06

Loved the beads

very hot, ms. kittyn, very hot indeed

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by Anonymous11/15/06

Loved the beads.

Try them on your Hubby nest time. You'll be amazed at the results. My wife almost drowned but turn about is fair play.

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by aSingleRose12/10/06

fuuuckkk

that was awesome. i want more!

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by Sacanaz01/25/07

The beads fill the needs

Your description takes me there, like all of your stories. I can only imagine that you have tried them yourself, but if you haven't, you should!

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by Anonymous06/20/07

WOW!!!

I am so turned on I can't stand it. Kind of like having my fantasies come to life through your characters. Maybe it will be my turn next!

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by Anonymous08/24/07

nice

you have me so wet now

please keep up the great stories

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by Anonymous08/25/07

Wow

I had such a great orgasm reading this that I broke the computer chair, So hot and so real, must get my husband to read it.

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by Anonymous10/21/07

Nice touch

The beads were a really nice touch. Haven't tried them myself, but am rushing out to buy a set. But the best part is Jack setting the whole thing up to surprise and delight his wife.

You must enjoy the thought of your writing touching so many people's lives, thinking how each interprets the story according to his or her own fantasies and relationships. One idea that occurs to me is that you legitimize taboo activity for couples, giving them permission to experiment. The nice thing is that it works to deepen and enhance a relationship. Thanks for all your stories.

from 'The Godfather'

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by Anonymous02/28/08

Great story

Loved the tenderness along with the beads, what an orgasm

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by Anonymous04/13/08

more rimming please

fantastic story. truly loved the rimming scene. more rimming please it got me so hot

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by Saucyminx12/18/08

Absolutely lovely

Thank you Selena. I was looking for a hot little distraction and your story was definately that. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

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by Anonymous02/05/09

this story is so hot

My husband and I had fun re enacting some of these scenes.
Except for the Lloyd part...
Sooo loved it. Thanks Miss Kitty for the best cum we ever had...so far that is..lol.

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by Anonymous02/05/09

this story is so hot

My husband and I had fun re enacting some of these scenes.
Except for the Lloyd part...
Sooo loved it. Thanks Miss Kitty for the best cum we ever had...so far that is..lol.

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by Anonymous02/05/09

hot so hot

hot

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by Anonymous04/15/09

so fukn hot

That shot was so fuckn hot I even came on my self whit out even I came so hot........

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by Anonymous04/16/09

me

Danny portillo im so gay that my bf never fuck me like that so for me it felt sexy enuff that I might tell him 2 dod that 2 me

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by Anonymous06/01/09

What a hot story

Really, really hot story. Love the descriptons of the action!

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great job

This was one of the best written pieces of erotica i've ever read. Sooo sexy.

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by easyridr10101/11/10

Well soaped and steamed

Artfully written, lovely Selena! You had me thoroughly entrapped within the steaming coils of your prose. Then you had your way with me, the best way to be had.

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by seminalvesicle03/23/10

WOW!

Excellent. Thank you.

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by coupoffun06/16/10

Fantastic!

I loved the story. I really enjoy anal sex with a woman and you made me feel like I was there! Great images, very descriptive, great story and action. Keep up the good work.

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by Wifewantsdp04/28/12

Hot

Good job on your writing. My wife also resisted anal sex. She now requests it. She (and I'm sure you also) does not understand why she waited and resisted so long. Keep the stories coming.

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by ssminnow4807/26/12

ass fun!!!!

My girl didn't until the whole finger while picker her pussy. think she would like i until I licked her little rose bud. Then fingertips while I teased her clit. It wasn't long before my cock was buried in that tight canal
. Now its part of our whole lovemaking. Every couple should allow themselves the joy of anal. We even let her strap one on to tickle my prostate now while I get a complete reacharound.

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by etagere05/14/14

liked your choice of words

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