All Comments on 'The Birdcage'

Who doesn't love these characters? :) But shouldn't it be in celebrity? I was a little surprised at the category, but enjoyed your rendition... good luck to you!

All three of your halloween submissions have been a joy to read! Good luck to you!

Another fantastic piece, humorous and sexy. As SK mentioned, both characters were meticulously developed and likable. Great job making this appeal to a larger audience.

Halloween in Vegas, baby! Sounds fun as hell. Your story was very imaginative and sexy. Loved the power dynamic. Good luck in the contest.

Clever dialogue and detailed BDSM/sex scenes. Highly erotic. A great read. Good luck in the contest.

Yes the lexical leakage in the feedback below was just about right. This was some tale and in my view better than the winner. I liked the twist in the tale (more leakage) where it appeared she was going to anally fuck him (standard literotica fare) and instead face fucked him. Well done, some originality. Like Robin, keep it up.

Not my 'bent', but bent all the same. Wonderful fantasy.

I really enjoyed reading this story! Genuinely portrays the feelings associated with a first time experience:). Thank you for sharing.

I just wanted to let you know that I read this story yesterday and it's been bouncing around in my head ever since!

I think this is my favourite short erotica so far. Well done! And very original as well!!! XD

absolutely my favorite story

This story was mentioned in Tink4fairy's article and it's why I clicked on the link...can't say I'm sorry. I enjoyed the characters and the plot. It was a fun read and I can see why it was mentioned in the article.

Keep up the good work.

I loved it, and nearly went over the edge when I thought she was going to take him with that dildo....oh well there's always next time. Hopefully there is more to cum (oops) at this same bat time, same bat station.

Brilliant story, written with verve and zeal, look forward to more !

A really honest portrayal of Catwoman and a really honest portrayal of Robin, ... and a really sweet domme/sub relationship. I like that the domme was secure enough in herself, that she didn't have to prove she was top, she just was, that she was free to enjoy the night, and was free to be sweet and tender afterwards. I liked that.

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