All Comments on 'A Dream Cum True'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotic Dreams!

Ty could get any chick he wanted. Yet Sasha and he were friends, comfortable with each other. Finally it only seemed right that they take their friendship to the next level. Sweet story. Characters seem natural and believable.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
the mind control part was very subtle...

good show

keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Ok

Was good until the very cliche ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

You should try adding dialogue.

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