All Comments on 'Cailee'

by hugh478

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Big spoonful of revenge 4 just a slap in the face

I'm gathering by the ski mask he wanted to stay anonymous? Pretty stupid of him to make the english teacher comment then don't you think? Narrows the suspects right down and twice you say 'are English teacher' I just don't get that and I don't get how she suddenly enjoyed the rape.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
First Story.

From the start you inform us that Cailee is a little cockteaser. To me it seemed you planned your story pretty well for a first attempt. You stayed on focus and accomplished what you set out to do. Wishing you the best in your future endeavors. Good Read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
what the hell

you had a pretty good story going....but what girl likes being raped? if youre gonna write a rape story...WRITE A RAPE STORY. get all the nasty shit in there...leave her crying, begging and hating it, otherwise all the kink you built up to disappears, and its just just a sex story.

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