All Comments on 'The Teacher Has a Secret'

Amy, like Mr Maser, I too need a daughter in my life. This was very loving, and erotic. Keep going with it.

I don't need a daughter, but my daughter could do this and then cum home to me with soaked panties so could eat her out all night! What do you think?

Very nice, I hope it goes on. Thanks

lets see this develop

Another father and daughter get together. Sarah makes nice with dear old dad!

Fabulous intro to what I hope will become a much more involved story. This has the chance to become a great long term read. Well done

Sweet, nice for first in series.

Loved the story. You need to keep it going!!

Amy:

Love your wirting. You have a great talent for expressing feelings and bring out senusality.

Keep up the great writing.

T

I really enjoyed the flow of the piece. Subtle. You took the time, where many would rush to the climax. Thanks for sharing.

these stories that make them easy to read and anticipation is written into every other word....

nice work

A very erotic story. I loved every word of it. I disagree with the need for future chapters. I thought it stood very well on its own, and continuing it would run the risk of moving from the interesting and creative to the cliche'. Well done, Amy!

as a way of describing the dialogue. I would recommend hanging out with a few twenty year olds and listening. The premise is good.

Thank you.

But Scorpio is completely right, the dialog is off. People don't talk like that. It's to... formal.

It may sound a bit formal or stilted but they aren't used to being lovers so awkwardness seems realistic when roleplaying such a naughty fantasy, in my opinion. As for the constant use of the word "Daddy" that's how me and my wife are. The main difference is that rather than speak her name I refer to her as a good girl who deserves to be fucked. It's very sexy, thank you for the erection.

The perfect tale of a predator using someones vulnerability. "Anytime you need a hug..." uggghhh, sicko alert. His daughter tried on lingerie for him? What a creep.

Not quite what I'd expect from such a relationship.

Wow!

I had some experiences like that with a young woman in her mid-20's many years ago. I was several years older. She was sexually inexperienced and wanted to learn. She wanted someone she could trust to teach her. I was willing and we had amazing times together. I showed her what it was like to ejaculate (she'd never seen a man jack off and shoot his load) and to be fingered by a man and to have her pussy licked. She wanted to experience holding my cock as I peed and feel my balls, and suck a cock. She had a beautiful hairy pussy that was so tight. It would strongly contract on my finger as I went inside her. Later, that feeling on my cock as I first entered her was mind-blowing. My cock was the first one inside her creamy velvety pussy. I never wanted to stop fucking her.

Sexy