by Fallenfromgrace
This writer has described in great detail and graphic description a coupling between two females. One has to appreciate the underlying tenderness that seems to exist between the two women. Intensely Erotic!
Although there wasn't much in the way of plot (it's pretty much just a sex scene), I still felt the connection between these two characters. That, my dear, is a gift. It takes talent to make the reader believe in the chemistry between two people in such a short time. Well done!
you have quite a way with words... lovely writing. this is an exceptional short that pulls you deep inside from the first paragraph. well done!
I thought this piece was well written and very erotic. Extremely well done for a first submission. Congratulations!
Very hot. You did a great job capturing the tenderness of a first time experience.
This was one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. Completely erotic and loving (surprised it was in the non-erotic section). Favorite line: "Silently flames burned in my heart. I knew we would be a log fire...with the occasional spark. Better that than fireworks, beautiful to see, but over so quickly."
so yeah...time is of no value when it comes to being with someone you love :3.
I really enjoyed this one. You've really made this an enjoyable read. I'm so tired of people listing breast size attributes like a catalogue. In fact, your characters aren't even named which just adds to the mystery. Your story was hot and immersive and one of the more unique ones on literotica. Thanks