All Comments on 'Cat's Got Your Tongue Ch. 01'

Poor unsuccessful Janet is upset from losing so many boyfriends. What to do? What to Do? She visits her friend, Linda and soon she is receiving a lesson in being comfortable with yourself. Naturally Linda has her own agenda and in record time the two of them are insanely busy as Janet puts her heart and everything else into her lesson.

Good Read! Enjoyable!

Poor unsuccessful Janet is upset from losing so many boyfriends. What to do? What to Do? She visits her friend, Linda and soon she is receiving a lesson in being comfortable with yourself. Naturally Linda has her own agenda and in record time the two of them are insanely busy as Janet puts her heart and everything else into her lesson.

Good Read! Enjoyable!

Thats all Janet needed was love and understanding that that stupid insensitive boyfriend wouldnt take that tiem to show Janet how it feels.

Pat

I loved the plot, and the sex was very hot. Yet, It felt like you were rushing past the friendship, past the seduction. The hot sex was just barely enough to keep me reading because there was so little background (Janet & Linda's friendship, Linda's secret lust for Janet, Janet's admiration of Linda's attitude, etc.).

Fortunately, today I was in as much of a hurry as you were, and I enjoyed it -well, I enjoyed the series quite a bit (this Ch. 01 was ok). Also, I noticed that your proofreading seemed to get better through the series. Keep writing.