All Comments on 'Wild Ride Ch. 04'

by Kapricorn71

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotic encounters!

A group of people with erotic enjoyment on their minds get together in a big way. Very fast paced. Good dialogue! This Writer moves his story rapidly through various sexual encounters. Good Write!

duke111duke111over 17 years ago
Good story....but

Good but you lost me sometimes with all the characters trying to figure out who was doing whom. Maybe its just me. Still enjoyed sex part.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous