For me, these lines stood out:
it never leaves me
this desire to mount the girl
at the check out counter
to suck the breasts of
my best friends wife
I have neanderthal dreams
on a smooth rock
their chests rising and falling
like freshly baked bread
like all those bitches
laying on the smooth rocks
catching their breath.
Some sections of the poem don't really appeal to me, but overall, good poem.
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