All Comments on 'By Invitation Only'

Left me begging for more!

really hot!

This is a very hot, very well written story! Please keep them coming!

Hi Jennifer,

Just wanted to say, well done, lovely stuff, makes one hot reading it, I wondered if it is something you are seeking?

Enjoy,

Laurent

The directness and intense sexuality went straight through me. I love the use of the blindfold, and the way you describe the intensity of her reactions because of it. I recognise the sensations! OK, I could nitpick here and there. One or two unintended changes of tense have slippd through, for example. But I am sure they do in my stories too, so I'm not mud-slinging, just trying to be helpful.

This the sexual 'flash' story at its best. Well, pretty close. Good enough for a 5 anyway!

hey jennifer great story i liked it do keep writing

I loved this story.....hummm, several guys cum'n all over you body....& then lick up by several sexy Ladies....I'd be in a dream!

Hot story :)

very hot. (i'm so jealous!)

What an amazing story. Very hot, you did a wonderful job

Thump

Jennifer, very hott indeed. I could imagine myself in that situation.

OMFG....I loved this story!!!

Hope we can see more from you!

very hot an sexy made me horny lol very good hun xox

That was such a hot story. Thnx for sharing it with us. I (amongst many, I'm sure) enjoyed reading it. xx

The anticipation is so direct in this - a really sexy piece.

love it very hot and direct!

love the description you used. Very very well done and hotter than hell.....

Not usually into bondage and fetish stories, but I loved this one, and the cum play was very hot. Would love to see more adventures by your character.

I found it very arousing, as this is something I have wanted to do to my girl freind for a long time

You keep writing, and I will keep cumming... back for more...

You need to write more and submit stories more often. (Yeah, I'm one to talk...)

You describe each step of your anticipation, arousal and fantasy, the excitement of strangers, and the come raining down. Hot! I'm looking forward to you adding more depth. Cheers,

LOVED IT.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

That was one of the hottest scenes. I ached every second of it. You really need to write more.

.....were about a real occasion, I'd pay good money to see the photos. Lovely story, please write more - SOON!

Hubee

The perfect story - manages to be totally sizzling in as few words as necessary. Excellent writing!

The writing and pace was excellent ... And I really enjoyed the content. The exhibitionism element in the story was very erotic, having her disrobed in front of the windows and then restrained and exhibited on the bed for all to see. I loved the Bukake situation, and all of that cum on her body, immediately licked off by the females ... All done in one page! Excellent ... Would love to see more!

About time we heard more of your sexploit lol xxxx

Need more! LOL. Very arousing, but string it along a bit.

The writing gets to the point without seeming rushed, and your pleasure in the events you describe comes across perfectly.

Loved your story.. Would love to chat with you.. So tell me all about yourself and the things you like... Email me at jimsmigh44@gmail.com

Jim

Well, that was fun! It's been 16 years, so I'd say it's time to fire up that keyboard again!!!!!

Ok, Jennifer. Loved it. You have a very fertile mind. Which means that your brain could get pregnant with new thoughts very easily. Thanks for the story. My dick is happy also.

Loved it! Maybe you could do a story with illustrations, preferably of you!

A very sexy -- and subversively dirty -- fantasy. But I think your lover was too quick to release you from the handcuffs...

You write well, and I would most enjoy another trip into your imagination.

Very well written, Jen,...all of your kinky cravings represented,,,have some ideas for a trip to the local sex club.