All Comments on 'Happy Halloween Party'

Your sick

Truly great black humor.

It was typical revenge story slop until the ending. At least you got it right with what happens to a chauvinistic mutant after his revenge.

I liked the rambling style of this Writer, how he sort of slips up on the story, all the while apologizing to his readers. Quite a clever ruse and an effective technique. A rambling pleasant story. Two guards and a Chaplain with the good book...What a way to go! Loved this story!

Unlike some of the others, I found great humor here. I picked up on the different style right away and was not at all dis appointed. Thanx Blues. LYG

Oh you rambling gambling kind of get even guy. I must say that you made sense except for the ending. Another party?

Nice work Author.

With High Regard

called Erotic Horror Humor.

I told you to keep up with your meds! You now how you get when you don't take your pills.

Sorry I didn't vote on this during the contest - I was out of town and missed it.

It does remind me somewhat of my story last Halloween, "Thanks a Lot". Well, no one can say we are in a rut!

Regards, Jack

I must say you have a very twisted mind.

The story was short, but sweet.

At first I was expecting some sort of demented wimp-husband story. Pleasantly you wrapped me around your finger, led me astray, and than surprised me completely, with a creative and first class ending.

Excellent workmanship.

where is a writer with some balls.

For a fine writer this was kind of disappointing. No deception , no suspence just beautiful wife cheats ---husband goes crazy and murders wife and lover. Not up to your usual standard.

60 year old Gweorge

this story is amazing. you deserve a standing ovation.

what a beautiful story.

I see some of your readers were disapointed, Blue. Being a fan I know your style and what you are capable of but Hey, where does it say a writer can't have a little fun now and then. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I probably should have put that in quotation marks. Anyway, I liked it, thank you for another enjoyable read. HAPPY HALLOWEEN! (only 11 days to go)

As always Blue.. You're a good guy in my book.. We both know some horrible story's about failed marriages.. This isn't the worst I've heard even though it's rather sick, I've heard true story's with kids involved that was worse..But it's always worse when kids are involved.. I'm sorry for that girl though,. But it was a Halloween story after all.. Cheers Yoron.

Now this is how a cuckold story should go! Would have been nice if he got away with it free and clear, but oh well.

Stupid bitch deserved every bit of "never stop" experience!

A cheating cunt of a whore wife gets her cumumpence....pun intended! HAHAHAHAHA!

Beautiful way to bring lovers together forever.

I hope every betrayed man considers this fantastic way to make his wife happy.

It would have been better if she could have lived long enough to really enjoy having her wish fufilled.

awesome that is something for all cheaters to have happen that is great.

love it

All cheaters deserve the same fate lol

cheating worthless slut.

now that is a well done btb story. 5

Very disturbing and well written. Five stars.

SICK

2 people died, but also a man who loved his wife granted her the impossible. That just shows his love for her.

of-course he snapped but he could have been violent, he was not. good story, but initial ramblings felt like he had taken poison & his time was near.

belief in the justice system is equivalent to belief in God, it does not matter, for the justice system is designed to help the masses, cant always guarantee about the individuals

He should have easily been able to get a decent psychiatrist to commit him to a mental institution instead. The gluing of her and her lover alone should have sealed that at a court.

I don't know why. He went nuts I guess. Obviously he didn't try to get away, or hide anything. With todays courts I can believe anything. The quality of judges we seem to have has certainly deteriorated.

She got what she wanted — to be fucked all the time. Just a suggestion: a couple of big tubes of Superglue would have worked faster and better to stick body parts together. You might ask how I know that.

5-stars

Next time you compose a snuff film, how about a warning?

A love story.

David Martin was a giver.

Lol.

Never got past the first chapter. simply tired of you so authors make husbands out to be simple minded. WHAT YOU SEE is exactly what it is. a wife in the arms of another man is Enough to toss her out, period.

Hooked, you suck and all other authors who make husbands into simple minded morons in their stories to were a reader simply cannot read the story to completion.Moving on to authors who have common sense with what they write about and incorporate realism into their tales..

Really enjoyed your story. I smiled a lot ...lol

I'm confused ...... I had a smile on my face after the first paragraph :)

And it stayed there until the last sentence. What a change of pace from the norm ! Really enjoyed it ... thanks for the laugh. Loved the Halloween theme! Great screenplay for a seasonal, potential, B horror movie ... blood and sex

Spooky. Spooky. Spooky. Damn.