All Comments on 'Blonde Fucks Blacks Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Yet another lack lustre effort from you

Look for help in your writing. It might help you be a better amateur writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Horrible

There is no mention of the original character 'Alice.' So it's wrong to bill this as a continuation of the irish woman's story. It's all narrated and that makes it even worse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hated the style

I loved the idea, the sequence, the plot, hated the writing style, I gave you a afive, in hopes you will go get some help in making it better

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Needs work

You are trapped in a very specific set of fetishes. Try to write something that is outside of your comfort range and perhaps you would improve.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...

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