All Comments on 'Your Most Precious Flower'

I enjoyed your poem (~_~) perhaps in length you lost the beauty of the flower (my opinion) this has two poems or a duel meaning, the flower being the first part was excellent, thanks for the read!

Welcome to Lit ~

An excellent first try;

From its length it's obvious you worked on this

But could use working and slimming -

A bit too long and too wordy.

By all means, keep on submitting;

Show us all you've got.

I do NOT agree that it is too long. . . . .You have masterfully crafted your words to paint a picture, others just draw a sketch with their words. Your words stimulate both the eros and all senses to appeal to the reader. I truly look forward to more work.

a little bit long... but its the most beautiful thing that I have read in quite a while. Simply excellent..thanks.