All Comments on 'A High School Life to Remember Ch. 01'

Nice interesting opening. I especially loved the references to WoD. They were a nic touch of reality in something of a fantasy. Hope you continue writing, the story is a little raw but I think given time you have the ability to do something good, and possibly turn this series into more than just a stroke story. If you want ot that is. Good luck.

Until Next Time, I remain...

Loved it man. I'm a big bust story fan. Keep up the good work.

Let's see where it goes!

This just had me thinking of the time at school when I walked into my room and one of my friends was there to demo her new corset.

If you like this story then pay attention, because in the next couple of days my next chapter of it will be up and running. If all goes well with the editors that is.

I love how young and dumb this is, perfectly teenage. It gave me an insight into how the mind of boy works, x