All Comments on 'A Lesson for a Fat Bad-Girl Wife'

Tons of Typos, Poor Language

Linear plot, 2D Characters

Lukewarm Sex, Too Rapidfore

And factually incorrect too

5'8", 160 lbs is never fat -

Especially not with such curves!

Among the worst I've read here.

Woman with 5'8" and 160 lbs ain't bbw. She should be something like 5'8" and 280 lbs.

To be frankly honest, I had to stop reading the story half-way. This story was more of a self reflection of dogmatic perception society has on minority groups, also, it did not maintain any chracterisation or storyline.

160 pounds on 5"8 would barely make her fat.

who doesn't know the difference between being curvy and being fat.

This is abuse. Awful writer-- just horrible. Jesus, learn how to write. And, do us a favour, learn the difference between abuse and submission. Because this is plain and simple abuse.

And females read things on this site too, you prick.