It was a very good story. There were some grammatical errors, but that didn't take much away from the story. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
I LOVED YOUR STORY THE MOTHER WAS VERY HOT AND LET US KNOW SHE REALLY WANTED HIS YOUNG COCK
I LOVE STORY'S LIKE THAT -MAKE ME VERY HORNYOAT ALL!!!
HOW ABOUT HAVING MOM 'TALK TO HER SISTER ON THE PHONE'TELLING HER ABOUT HOW HUGE HER NEPHEW'S COCK IS AND WOULD SHE COME SPEND THE WEEKEND AND HELP HER SEDUCE HIM
Good story line they both seem to really enjoy each other
I'VE OFTEN DREAMED OF SUCKING MY MOMS BIG TITS.I'VE SEE THEM BOUNCING IN HER LITTLE TWO PIECE BABY DOLLS.I STILL DREAM OF THEM NOW,ONLY MY COCK IS LYING BETWEEN THEM NOW.
fantastic sotry , extremely well narrated . it just narrated my own favourite and loved fanatsy . its was just loving to experience "verbally" the mother/son's sacred incest love . keep going.
If I had to read the word "cunt" one more time I felt like I was gonna throw something at my computer screen. The story was so lost on me because the overly repetitive grotesque language. I do believe there is more than one way to say "cunt." Look it up if you're confused.
I liked the story but think that things happened too fast...
A woman is in her late 30s or early to mid 40s. She's a single parent, divorced or widowed. Men her age are looking for much younger women. In this story, the lady, luckily, lives with her good looking well-built 18-year-old son, Jonny, who's at the peak of his male potency. Mom discovers her boy's deep interest in sons fucking their mothers. She already loves her son dearly; now she's anxious to get his big teenage dick up her desperately needy motherly twat. What could be more normal than that? Jonny has to unload his potent teenage balls maybe 3 or 4 times a day. His mother has to get fucked hard and often! So, son's stiff dick and his Mom's yearning cunt come together. This is a story that's repeated many tens of thousands of times all over the country. It's as normal as apple pie--and as normal as a boy's lust for his mommy's hair pie!
Story ok, but written with several gammatical errors. As if english isn't your native language. Proofread or submit to a fellow author before. I haven't submitted anything, but I love to read. So seeing a story with so many errors detracts from its impact.
Fantastic story. I enjoyed the buildup to sex. Unlike another writer, your use of the word cunt was for me a turn-on. But use discretion. Would Mom be hesitant to use this word? Hope you write more. Pregnant mother in future? Check out another author who writes (true stories???) about incest. He/she uses the name "handlewithcare" in literotica. Very hot stories as well.
One of my greatest fantasies ... to find my "son" jerking off ... even better to thoughts of me. Mmmmmmmmmmmm. By the way, I am a woman and I love the use of the word "cunt". I use it with my younger lover all the time. Cunt, cunt, cunt ... makes me wet just to hear it. Thank you for your story and don't pay attention to the grammar police.
Tell more how they fall in love and conclude with mother wanting to marry son so she can officially be his wife and become pregnant with his baby.
I like that they both were loving and thoughtful of each other's needs.
Well done and very erotic.
Thanks for the read.
keep the stories coming i am gonna be a true reader of all your work keep em coming
grammer is shit, but idea of story quite good,
needs an editor or someone to proor read.
son get your mum pregnant with 7 babyes
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