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by Violalee3

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good

Very nice story! Thank you for sharing. I hope to see more of you work soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
check your spelling

Violalee3:

You wrote<<The master bedroom windows were open, I could here them whispering. She was giggling. I wish she'd stop sounding so happy. They grew silent . And then. . . she began to moan.>>

It should be "I could HEAR them whispering.

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