All Comments on 'wrestling thoughts'

Witty and well thought through. But you really shoulda skipped the last stanza. The poem don't need it.

Concur with Liar & Angeline

About the ending here;

At first thought it elucidated

But now I see it's overkill;

With that title and all the imagery

That last strophe seems to fall flat.

Damn Art ~ didn't even see a typo here

Took your time on this one!

words make this a keeper...I think the delivery was fine...smiles..blue