All Comments on 'Grandfather Yule'

story has been mentioned in today's New Story Review thread found in the Author's Hangout.

That is a wonderful Christmas story, Darkniciad. I loved reading that so much. Good Luck in the competion.

Nice piece of writing, Dark. The jolly fat man legend seems more real when you tell it. Good luck in the contest.

Interesting take on the Christmas legend.

R. Richard

I like your version of the legend. I'm pleased you didn't shove sex in the tale somewhere. I believe that would have destroyed the magic and wonder. Good luck in the contest! ~Minx

Wonderfully told, Dark. I loved this one, it left me with a smile on my face.

One of the best. Good luck on winning.

Sarah M.

And your world continues to grow...It is a touching and impressive addition to it...

and thank you for sharing this with Lit.!

Lovely Yule story! Please keep writing!!

About up to your usual standard, which is very high. Loved it.