All Comments on 'A Gray Area Ch. 05'

I love this story, please write more I can't wait to read further!

It is apparent that you don't have an editor or proofreader. You like to use too except that you only use one "o" instead of two! Anther glaring error is excepted instead of accepted which corroborates that you DO need an educated editor and/or proofreader. Story line is a little convoluted and very slow to build to any eroticism.

lol the fact that you were crying about the author not proofreading his stuff, while at the same time saying Anther instead of Another, is actually very comical. If you're going to cry about proofreading, maybe proofread your own stuff before sending it.