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this has a lot of potential! I think if it were snipped a bit here and there, it would pack a more powerful emotional punch :)

rats, I signed in, I do not know why it came up as anon. what a pain we have to type in our name every time?

I don't know that snipping would make it any better, perhaps adding more <bigrin although the poem seems a perfect length I longed for more (~_~) nice write!

Take a deep breath before reading and then at the end,

Remember to once again

Breathe.

Not bad for a nonerotic piece.

Intense moments resolved to quietude ~ a satisfactory aftermath.

overcome mentat masturbation. TK U MLJ LV NV