All Comments on 'Reflection'

mentioned on today's review

Really enjoyed this... I think it could start with the third line. What do you think? It seems that the first are covered in the theme of the rest of the poem, and the napkin analogy is so strong, would be a great place to start, grab the reader in.

I sipped this poem like a fine bottle of wine... 'delicious' (~_~)

"Let me take up your brightness in a porcelain cup

And sip from it until you're mirrored in my eyes"