All Comments on 'Incisive'

exactly what you mean.

ironic

insightful and

incisively inciteful ;)

mentioned on today's review

I was thinking how exactly incisive this was, soft hugs to you hon.

Dead on...!

Love the idea as a comment - great observation but not a great poem. Reads better without the last 9 lines ?

what i'm sayin', ya know? Great read thanks for sharing

TT

...the way you clash

presicion

in form and content

with intent

of impresicion.

Intentional,

or an indent

in the insicion?

There will ALWAYS be a kind woman who will give you some soft hugs if you tell her that you have an open bleeding wound!

But what I like is that I found myself doing the movements that rappers do before this ended -you got me by the rhythm!

p.s. are you saying that you posted it in one flow - no changes - no breaks for thought- like automatic writing?

<chuckleboned... ya got me, cool poem (~_~)

Good line about revision, "moments of heart and hurt are not about revision" but I still feel like I want to revise this poem a little. :)