All Comments on 'First Time to a Swing Club'

by fremiste

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Terrible dialogue

Are these people native English speakers? They sure don't sound like it, and the silliness of their dialogue sure cools the story off. Too bad, because otherwise there's potential there.

ptebadenptebadenalmost 8 years ago
Too short

Please, continue

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Nancy

This must be the home club of Nancy and Kamala. The place where they gain their support.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous