by celtcdawn
Beautiful tear jerker for me, being a submissive myself and deeply devoted to my Master, I can sympathize with her. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Balanced, not over done, and beautiful.
Thank you. That was brave of you, I think. Do write more.
Roger
i almost passed over this story, but am extremely glad i didnt. a beautiful story of true love and devotion. well done, i hope to see more from you.
http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=20076074#post20076074
A wonderful story, celtcdawn. The emotions and unflagging devotion/love of their relationship is the centerpiece of the story and you've created a beautifully bittersweet tale.
of D/s love. Lyrical and sweet. A real tear jerker. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
A wonderful story, grabbed me by the heart and held fast ... fabulous. Thank you for sharing your talent.
The Jazzy One
waaaaaaaaaaahhhhh *dabs tissues over her eyes* beautifully written. thanks for making reading it so worth it.
Heart warming devotion. It was definitely a 4 kleenix story! Emma said great job.
A very touching tale my dear. Keep writing you do it very well and with great feeling. Hugs Highlandvampyre
Thank you so much for this account of a beutiful life.
There are things that can be spoken of, only by those who have lost...those who have found...those who have lived this life. These words grasp that, display it and praise it. Thank you for this.
This tired old dragon needed that. I can never look at the night sky again...I will never see Christmas the same...I will never be the same.
Well written, although it was a little short to be able to get a real feel for the characters. The ending was a touch hurried, but satisfying.
I loved the story, though there wasn't enough of it to make real tears fall. Good luck in the contest! ~Minx