All Comments on 'You. Owe. Me. Ch. 06'

Hope you come out with more chapters soon. I've missed this story for quite a while, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I am so glad to see this back. Honestly I thought it would never be. Please continue it! This is truly a great story and I have to know what happens!!!

Excellent story exceptionally well written.Please continue with this story, like a lot of readers i want to know what happens.

So glad to see you back at this story, but PLEASE get us the next chapter. Everyone wants to know how this is going to play out now. It is a wonderful love story so PLEASE hurry with the next installment, hopefully wrap it all up with a long chapter.Now, quit reading my drivel and GET WRITIN'.

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it's soon.

OMG...come on and give us more....im dieing here...how could you do this to us!

more more more, and you better not wait another year to post again

MAKE MORE!!! DAMNIT!! COME ON DUDE!!! THATS SOOO LAME!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! AND HURRY :-D

The End? No Way! There has to be a chapter 07 or so. This is a very well written, entertaining love story that deserves a 'happy ending' conclusion to it. And, like the others, I don't want to wait forever for it. Please write!

dude. ditto to everybody else's posts. make more.

too hot to handle but we all need this ending!!! I need to see these two end up together!!!

Why dude couldnt you finish it huh? just leave people hnging dont you!!! finish pur-lease.Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please. :)

Beautiful mate! i'm truly addicted! you're probably sick of hearing it, but please please please please pleeeeeaaasee write more. can't wait.

peace out x

Can't wait for more chapters to come. It's a great one.

been waiting for status on this story for a couple months now. welcome back. love the story line. whats happening neeeext :) hope we find out sooner than later

Absolutely amazing. Please finish soon!!!

That's not fair. Where is the end of the story? Hope it will be soon. Please. Pretty please!!!

Dont do this dude! where's the rest?

Short and very nicely done.

My girlfriend and I found your story looking for a little spice in our sex lives. Your story was easily the best I found on here. It surpassed the usual dirty words, it was sensual, and interesting. It painted a beautiful erotic story, whose characters I actually cared for.

Keep up the good work, and you owe it to yourself and all your fans to atleast eventually release further volumes :)

This is a great story. It is different then the stories I usually read. Please complete the story when you can, to leave it unfinished would be a shame.

WOW AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please finish it

please do the next one? it's so romantic as well. I want to know what happens next!

It's been awhile since this story was updated. Maybe it doesn't have a happy ending.

I love your story!! please update! are chris and laura going to be ok?!

I didn't look at dates before I clicked to post a comment, so I'm not sure how long it's been since you've added on to the story, but please! please! finish it!

The characters are great, the sex is hot, and while I'm pulling for a foursome, I really just want Chris and Laura happy, in love, and fucking their brains out!

this is amazing, finsh! and finish soon! happy ending, please?!?!

This is a great series. Very well written and convincing, when is the ending coming. It can't end like this.

I loved this story series but it can't end like this, what happens, do they make up or break up, do they get over this set back and come out with their relationship or is it over. it needs a better ending than this and we are all waiting for it. i hope its a happy ending.

Come on! you have to finish this story! It has come this far already you cant stop til its finished!

I need some.

Please finish the story...

Wouldn't you know it. I find a story I love, I spend all day thinking at work WHAT HAPPENS NEXT and the story ends on a cliffhanger. (sigh) YOU BETTER FINISH IT.

P.S. Love the series keep on writing.

Oh, come ON, man! This is probably one of the best series on literotica right now, not to mention some of the best writing I've ever read in my entire life! Don't just leave us with a cliffhanger forever! Finish it!

Jesus Christ. I don't think there are enough ways in the human language to apologize for my absence. But I'll try: I'm sorry!

I admit, I'd lost track of this story for a long time. Honestly, today was the first time I've been to this site in a long, loooong while. Life has been - how shall we say - busy. But seeing these comments has brought a weight of guilt upon me heavier than my fat uncle. And trust me, that's hea-vee.

Thank you everyone for the interest in this story and I hope I haven't squandered it. Rest assured, Chris and Laura are coming back to you. Maybe it will be the ending, maybe it won't. I can't say for sure. And I can't say when. But I am working on it.

A great story. Leave us with a cliff-hanger ending? I can't wait for the next chapter. You should write in the contests. Keep up the great work.

Cliffhanger...Ever. Its 3:30a.m. here, im supposed to be up for class in about 4 1/2 hours. I wont be sleeping cuz i'll be obsessing over how this will end. Jerk... =D

a great read very well written ........ but u will finish it or i'll call u names lol

Nice series man....keep up da gud work....hope da next chapter is coming up soon....great job!!

I already sent you a message - could get the comment submission on my iPhone.

So about 3 weeks ago you said you were coming back, and I'm glad! I'd be happy to see another 100 chapters of this, honestly.

If Chris and Laura end up together happily in Chapter 7 and that's the end - I'll be happy, but I'd love to see this carry on so much further!

You have such a wonderful talent and the vivd description makes me want this to become a movie or something! What Chris and Laura get up to - it's not seedy, it's loving, tender and carefully thought out.

I'm one of the many people who really can't wait for your next submission - so drop whatever else is going on in your life and satisfy us all :D

Jenna x

this series is absolutely fantastic and i cant wait for you to put the next chapter up!

please put up more!!!! love it

NAOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When I was 15 my 12 yr old stepsister and I began expirimenting. At first we just felt each other up, but one night she told me she wanted to see mine and that she would show me hers. As soon as I was exposed she grabbed my cock and demanded that I take her virginity. I was a little apprehensive at first, but the thought of pressing my hard cock into her tight, wet pussy was too much. She spread her lips and as i slid in i almost exploded inside her. She was so tight that my cock didn't fit all the way inside of her. She straddled me and rode my cock until it exploded all over her pussy. She wanted me to cum inside her, but I refused. Then after I came all over the outside of her hole she put it back inside her, which i probably shouldn't have let her do. I still get hard instantly just imagining the site of her cum covered cunt.

You have to finish this. We cant be left hangning like this. PLeas Pleas please finish this....

You gotta finish the story i LOVE it

OMFG I LOVED IT I WANT MOREEEEE OMG!!!! you have to finish it i have to find out if they stay together they have to omg that was the best story i have read in likr 4 ever omg omg omg i have to read more plzzzzzz finish i will be waiting :) cant wait to read the rest!!! o0o ur an amazing writer:)

YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS!! I CAN FORSEE LIKE 15 MORE CHAPTERS IN THE FUTURE!! DO IT!!!!!

This is an awsome story, the description, the emotion, and the way you painted the story into my mind. I love how every chapter keeps me interested in what happens next. Just awsome, one of the best stories i ever read, and its not just a sex story theres so much background story and filler to make it "Full" and real. Just an outstanding job! I cant wait to read the rest of this! POST SOON!

I just finished reading all six chaperes. I loved the story. It was very well written. I feel there is room for the story to continue; in other words. Keep writing. You have talent. Another chapter or twenty would be nice.

Thanks again:

jim9894

I read the six chapters and I loved it!!!! It's the best story I've read so far, the plot line is amazing... But it shouldn't end here, keep writing

they need to be TOGETHOR......CONTINUE PLEASE!!!! Don't STOP HERE!!

Nice. Passion complex emotive characters.

Really like the immediate issues.

1. Some tough editing would improve it.

2. Laura is a bit too crazy

3. I'm concerned that resolving the tension will make it passe .

4. If your really good, I'd roll it back a bit and see if you can convincingly develop a poly romance (this is a very tough challenge since it is not commonly experienced). How close are Chris and Brad? Chris and Laura could have confessed their attraction to the buddies earlier.

you have to continue to write, stopping now would kill me and all the other readers who enjoyed this story as much as i did

please write more

:)

thank you

brittany

I like the whole series...More! Well done, erotic, and a good read.

WOW! Luv it, was wonderful plus the way it was phrased. Read all six and was perfect. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Didnt see Shannon coming but figured something coming up with Becky, Chris is kind of slow. BUt good characters and cant wait to see how things spice up.

Awesome.cant wait to read the next chapter. they hve to kiss and make up... :-D

There really has to be another chapter or 2 after this. It ending this way wrenched me from my seat. I'll admit there's typos and awkward wording here and there, but at this point I dont care, the story is great, and that's all that matters.

Please, continue this!!

It really needs a more conclusive ending. Other than the lack of a true ending, it is a great series.

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!! Please hurry with the next chapter, I'm addicted. I read the whole thing in one sitting and was sooo disappointed it ended there. Please hurry I absolutely loved it.

I sat and read this whole thing and I am officially addicted!!! Good luck with the next chapter, I will be looking forward to it with very high expectations!!! You're an awesome writer!

ACK, what a HUGE let down to see no ending to this story. I'm assuming that there will not be an conclusion since you have not updated it since 2006. What a disappointment!!! I hate when I get wrapped up in a story that just stops without a conclusion. HUGE DISAPPOINTMENT to a good story.

I am assuming you do not write anymore or maybe just not for this site but, you may want to thank author Sgeorge for completing your story. He did a good job. Although your story was very good, it didn't have an ending.

Can you post the link to the story completetion please? I can't wait for some freakin' closure.

You have this story set up perfectly, in any sense. I truly love it. Whatever you do, wherever you are, keep writing.

when's the next sequal??

i cant wait for it!

very well written!

I think Laura should punish Chris for being such a fool, but then Chris deserve an opportunity to explain, to justify his actions, he and Laura are so perfect for each other she'll forgive him, eventually. Becky needs to be killed....sorry know she is fictional, still you don't do stuff like that to people. I reckon she knew it was Chris in the bathroom all along and she wanted to "get even" with Laura for some long ago run-in.

I could not stop reading this i have been stuck at my computer for the last 2 days reading. Your writing is so encapsulating your details in all the events are wonderful. I was a bit diapointed that you did not write the ending yourself becuse as others im sure once i finished reading this chapter i wanted to know how it was all going to end. I think if you wrote the ending for this yourself it would be much better.

Please finish it!!!! Prettttyyy pleaseez

Oh! Pleaaaase please please finish! It's got me SO drawn in :D

Cant end like that... more!!

FUCK that made me make an account just to subscribe, in case you keep going that is, dude you should this story is AMAZING it got me sooooo turned on, and it had actual love in it. i loved this story so much

Great story, one of the best I've read around here recently.

come on give me more it cant end like that

don´t let it end like this...brilliant story !!!!

You cant let it end like this. U have to make a chapter 7. if not that was a horrible ending to a terrific story.

this ending sucks for a great story

Great story man, Just goes to show when you fuck up, things can get really fucked. Puns intended of course. Hope it ends happily.

Great great greeeat story! Wish it had more chapters though...I became addicted ;)

amazing story!!! you should continue it!! i swear!! cannot wait for the next one!

I actually got bored with the sex scenes and was just interested in the story. you're a pretty good writer.

I knew for several episodes that their secret was not going to stay their secret, what I find disappointing is who was tasked with speaking to the hedonists. BJ Becky doesn't qualify. Parents, maybe, or police. The question of whether there is anything wrong with what they did is never answered. Certainly, kids like this have means and opportunity, but so what. Ever without a step sibling kids find someone to service them. The real story, and not a pleasant one,is how the step kids continue to share the bathroom at home. That could be agony.

PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! YOU'RE AN AMAAAZING WRITER AND I'M ADDICTED!!!!!

I'M HAVING WITHDRAWLS :(

I have just read all of them and now there needs to be more.. Its very addicting and good In my opinion. Please write more, because this is like an abrupt ending.

Please write more it sucks to have it ended like this!! and make sure Chris and Laura make up!!!!

You're stopping now?!?! You can't stop now, write more the story is NOT anywhere near finished!!! Good story line and great writing!!! Don't stop now!!!

More

u need to make a 7th cuz i need to know wat happens after.

Im hoping you almost done with you 7th chapter and if there isnt going to be one there HAS TO BE ONE!!

Please do not leave it like this! It is such a great story, but it is not finished yet. Please say you are not stopping???

What happens between Chris and Laura?

It is an amazing story please finish!

How can you end like that?? whats wrong with you?? why would you do that to your audience?? please write the next one soon. weed makes everything better.

the guy who rote this has died. this is not the end tho he wrote another almost finished chapter about laura and chris in which he explained how they had becky swear not to tell simon and simon had been oblivious and where he'd eventually had chris bang the door down and explain to laura what he felt, the story concludes with him and her explaining to their mom and dad and deciding to move out and the parents decide to stop them saying it's ok to b like this... i'm not a good writer like rj228212 but i can't make up how he'd realy end it there wasn't and ending per se' but that was as much as he'd writen srry all

It was 2:30am when I started reading the first chapter of the series. I was depressed and very horny, so I thought a little literotica would help me get to sleep faster. Oh my god, now it's 5:49am. I'm at the edge of my bed waiting for the most romantic fairytale ending to happen, and I don't even care about the fact that I'm waking up in 3 hours!

This story has drawn me in so perfectly. Every scene between Chris and Laura has pulled and tightened me in closer and closer to the story line. Despite me being an 18 year old guy, I've never felt so sympathetic for a character than I have Laura. The romantic details are great, the characters are well-created and believable, and you have a knack for gutting the storyline and giving us the main course. Your work is truly amazing and it's never felt so good to stay up late reading such an enthralling and subtle love story. Thank you:)

I'm just horrible when it comes to finishing things. I know it's been years since I last posted anything for this story, and I'm very sorry to any of the readers who have run out of patience. But the 7th and final chapter is in the works, it's just taking me some time (obviously). I won't make empty promises about when it will be ready, but I can promise I have not forgotten you, Literotica.

- RJ

Your writing is unbeleivable, and i felt like i could everything that Chris and Laur felt. I didn't like it when chris cheated, but i now feel like he has already payed his penance, just for the pain he was recieving. Wonderful story, now off to read the last chapter. :D

Oh...my- just x_x this is the most amazing thing ive ever read and such a cliffhanger aaghh i need more! so good! >__<

This has to be one of the best stories i ever read if u could some how get this made into a book im sure lots of ppl would read and enjoy it. U have soome real talent and i cant wait for the end of this one and the next story u write on here

Please write the next chapter soon.....I could get run over by a gas truck tomorrow and die not knowing what becomes of Chris and Laura. That would make it all the worse

R, how much longer do we have to wait. I feel a connection to chris and laura and desperately wanna see the next chapter.

wow we need more

Ok the depth of the characters is Justitie annoyingly good.

And nice storyline arch. You are a great writer. NOW pleaaase don't keep us in suspense . Cant wait to see how this plays out. (big blergh at becky btw)