All Comments on 'Eye for an Eye Ch. 1'

A nice start, with lots of places to go. More episodes please.

Well set up. It will be interesting to read how they learn about and from each other, their personal difficulties, connect through mutual empathy and understanding, and help each resolve their issues. I look forward to your continuation of the story.

its interesting. I am a disabled person who has had an on again off again relationship with a cutter. I've gotten a few drunken cutting phone calls. I would like to see where this goes.

You've got me interested... What's next?

Excellent writing, but please get an editor. Emitted to the hospital is getting discharged. Artitech is architect. Please keep writing. Luis

It's the little mistakes and misspellings that spoil the story. Your plot and characters are great but the spelling mistakes and sometimes stilted language spoil the effect.