by Selena_Kitt
Too short - too good to be issued in serials - publish in a book form please
putting it mildly and every woman deserves a G-Spot orgasms, but why are these so short. You could have told us in detail about the two leather clad lesbians and anyone else. What does she do that she might have to give up her corporate career? Please tell us more....
is how your story left me. I love watching women cum on these machines and your story was great. Please include a bit more detail about what the woman is experiencing as her orgasm grows...otherwise...great job:-)
I thought maybe we'd get to hear about Tasha finally getting off after seeing all the other woman get off at the first party.. maybe with a little help from her friends?
As is with the rest of the chapters of "The Sybian Club," this was a "very stimulating read" to be sure. Keep the chapters coming and I'm sure that I will as well. Meow! >^,,^<
Now your just teasing. These chapters are way too short - but off to read chapter 6.
<p>"Orgasm coaching", now <i>there's</i> a concept! This is a very hot series, but this time you let us down a little. This could have been at least a little longer - I could have read about Tasha encouraging Ashley to just "let it come" for several pages by itself. I think in this regard, you missed the boat by a little; but then, no one else could have done what you've done with this series.</p>
Details, Details! What's the chance that if she gives up her corporate job, that they will invest in more Sybian machines? Sounds like they're going to need them with all the members they have already. Also, to save time, maybe everyone could order their own attachments so she doesn't have to worry about all the sterilization. I also love to watch Sybian movies. Watching a woman totally lose it when she cums is quite something to see. Sometimes it seems women have all the damn fun!
The best one yet. Im reading these on my phone during the rare slow night at work. Can't wait to get home ;)
I have been rating all the stories in this series "5" but this one I HAD to comment on. The scene played out in this story was so beautiful and touching. Where all the others in the series get me excited this one made me feel happy. Thank you!