All Comments on 'Caught Parking'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Is there a number 2???

Hope you keep going with this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good story

A pretty fair plot, but it could have been so much better if you had edited out some very tiny mistakes. They seemed to stop me dead in my tracks as I read on.

I wish you had explained how she got there on her own and how she knew to be a passenger in your car.

I don't mean to be so picky, but it did distract from the story a little and instead of being a great story, it was just a good story.

But thanks anyway and good luck in the future.

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Just Lovely - Not

Would have been nice to know the story is about rape/blackmail before I started reading it.

And since it seems like the blackmailer continues to be the focus of the story I seriously doubt he ends up with his balls removed like they should be.

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