All Comments on 'Things Learned from Gravity'

Had no trouble following this; you must get a kick out of doing this type.

Love it!! how do you get the text to go like that? however, It works wonderfully, good job :)

Reading this was like walking down a curvy winding path. A total delight around each literary bend of the road.

I love this word sculpture, great presentation and easy to follow both literally and literally.

Tess - untwisting

Now that's gooooood.

as a standard poem this would have been good. With the creative use of line and motion this is fantastic. Well done!

Ahh... (just thoughts from a dumb blonde)Gravity makes things fall down. But and I say but, if there were such a thing as negative gravity then imagine what a mess a guy would make when he peed.

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is like the apple, countless saw they all felt. TK U MLJ LV NV