Perhaps a little on the long side, but wow, what a hot story. Loved how Mom was persuaded, an all-round great story. Thanks.
by
Anonymous11/23/06
Hot and hotter
Started off with excitement then got better and then better still. Hope to hear and read more of this threesome.
by
Anonymous11/23/06
HELL YES
have you fucked lisa's ass yet thats what i wanna know
by
Anonymous11/23/06
way too ...........
long for a single submission this should have been 3 or 4 parts. didn't finish it because it is too looooooong to read in one sitting.
by
Anonymous11/23/06
thanks for giving us a whole story,and not teasing
i think most writers have mindlaps and can't write but one chapter at a time.thanks for giving us a story we can sit down and enjoy.teasing stories suck and why not write it down at one time.your fans will be waiting for your next story,see we read it more than once.that to really enjoy the sexual overtures.thanks for a story you can now and not have to wait weeks or months to finish reading.
by
Anonymous11/23/06
W.O.W!
`One of the hottest Lit stories EVER. (And I'm a gay woman!)
A little long, but it doesn't lose it's intensity.
This was one of those stories that comes along at Lit once in a while, that I have to read through no matter how long it takes, and makes me cum a number of times and I just end up coming back for more...
Very hot story, and I thought it was great that the mom was seduced into things near the end, while the guy and his sis were getting off together and enjoying the voyeuristic, teasing relationship with mother. I'll be watching out for more stories from samslam in the future.
-Capt
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Anonymous11/24/06
excellent cocksucking!
I've only read the first 4 pages of the story - he's teasing her by licking her slit for every 2 minutes of cocksucking - mmmmmmmmmmmmm amazing!!
by
Anonymous11/24/06
Two cocks up!
I echo "TheCaptain"'s comments below. Amazingly hot story. Looking forward to more.
Thank you.
by
Anonymous11/24/06
WOnDERFUL
Loved your story. I was wishing I had a story like this to tell about my sister. We had some fun, but nothing like this. I hope you will continue writing. Enjoyed it very much.
by
Anonymous11/24/06
Amazing
This story was one of the best stories ever!!!! You must write more incest stories!!!
...your use of first person was really irratating, but the over steam heat of the story made up for most of the editing problems. A good editor would be your next move. Just...very VERY hot story! The kind that makes the incest catagory sexier than any other. Good show for a first time...but find that editor. You won't regret it.
by
Anonymous11/25/06
Greater than the Greaterst...
You Rock...
Keep rocking..
by
Anonymous11/25/06
Absolutely Fantastic
This is what good erotica should be: slowly increasing tension, lots of resistance, strongly defined characters and a twist or two.
Keep up the excellent work, samslam, and thank you for your efforts.
by
Anonymous11/26/06
Fine Story
A but long. I'd have liked it better if it were in several chapters rather thsn one non-stop story.
The first part, just brother and sister was simply top notch. The addition of Mom -- in my view -- was a detriment. And -- again in my view -- when Mom did get involved, it might have been better with some reticence on her part, and her having to be slowly seduced, step by step, rather than having her jump in with no real qualms at all.
There's a reason this is on the Top Stories list. Everything about this story is top notch. Though it could've been cut into chapters, that would ruin its high rating :)
Screw the unsatisfied nit-picker who claims you need an editor. This is one of the finest stories I've read on this site. An instant classic regardless of the wanna-be lit professor's comments. Truly high art of the most erotic style.
by
Anonymous12/07/06
UNREAL
The best storie i've ever read here.......AWSOME
by
Anonymous12/09/06
Great Stuff
Great Stuff, My Friend...
Keep Posting and Cumming.
Thanks for the post. I'll always be looking for a story from you.
by
Anonymous12/10/06
Erotic Adventure
Exceptional story with continued anticipation as to what innocent erotic adventure will they encounter next.
by
Anonymous12/22/06
OMG!!
Oh, my FUCKING GOD!!!!!
That story was amazing.
Well done on a top read!
by
Anonymous12/22/06
It Doesn't Get Any Better!
This is one of the best I've ever read. Thanks for sharing your outstanding story telling talent with us and please keep writing.
by
Anonymous12/23/06
Fuck....
FUCK!
thats gotta be the best thing I ever read, you've made this pervert very happy :) .
by
Anonymous12/23/06
Wow!
Had to ride my vibe TWICE during this nugget! Well done!
by
Anonymous12/26/06
Couldn't Stop Reading...
It's late and I should be in bed, but I couldn't stop reading 'til the end of this awsome story. Two cokes, a piece of cheesecake and 3 orgasms later and I'm a very satisfied reader. If only my life were as good as this story.. I could die a happy man right now. Very well done. Keep 'em coming!
by
Anonymous12/28/06
Size does matter!
Excellent work, the dynamic between latent attraction, fantasy and relationship worked really well for you. I often find when stories branch out from the central core, in this case the Jack/Lisa attraction, that the theme gets tacky. This sadly was also the case with "My Virgin Sister", dragging the mother into the relationship seemed like overextending good materiale. Likewise the sale of blowjob lessons wasn't convincing and the transition from learning experience to relationship was a bit quick.
Never the less this story definitely deserves the top placing it has. Thank you for your hard work.
by
Anonymous12/28/06
Oh. My. Fucking. Ghawd.
Jesus. H. Macy.
That has got to be one of, if not THE, BEST stories I have ever read on this or any user-submitted erotica site.
Kudos.
by
Anonymous12/29/06
WOW!
Loved the story. The sex was phenom. I happened to be reading this at work, and I had to go in the bathroom for a bit of private time...But I can't WAIT to get home and get a good fuck from my vibrator.
by
Anonymous12/30/06
Possible, but really wild
Incredibly hot and wild.
by
Anonymous12/31/06
mmmmmmmm
First four chapters were ooohhh sooo very hot...then it was kinda routine, but involving mom was not really very convincing. Anywayzzz I fingered myself 3-4 times during the period I was reading it...could not leave it in the middle.
by
Anonymous01/06/07
Where was my sister when I was that age.
unbelievable, I couldn't stop reading it. Jack was one lucky SOB...literally!
by
Anonymous01/11/07
Excellant
I agree with prior statements...Where was my sis back then? Maybe if I had read that....?
Anymore chapters forthcumming to this will be gladly read, BEFORE anything else.
by
Anonymous01/13/07
Amazing
I loved it, so detailed and hot. keep this up and you could make a novel
by
Anonymous01/14/07
Just About Perfect.....
Thanks very much for making my day!
Things to consider:
1) Very good pacing and generally believable until Lisa walks into Mom's bedroom to begin the setup. The Mom experience could have been contained in a follow-on story with the same intense buildup and detail as this story. It was just "too easy" for her to immediately have sex with BOTH of her kids.
2) The title is not really appropriate; so much more than a one-time virginity session. No hymen, multiple orgasms, and I Love You's the very first time? In the great majority of female experiences (forgetting the incest), it just doesn't happen (and rightly so).
When I read the existing comments, I am sure they will appreciate your efforts as much as I did.
I actually love long stories but this one was so hot, i never noticed it was so many pages!... Great pacing, wonderful characterization and very plausible!... Thanks.
by
Anonymous02/20/07
so wet
just reading this stroy got me so so wet and i just could not stop playing with myself i no its wronge but it feels so right really wish i could get fucked like jack did lisa
by
Anonymous04/06/07
THE BEST *****
THE BEST NEED MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous04/07/07
Perfect
One of the best stories I have ever read!
by
Anonymous04/19/07
A good article
This is one of the better articles I have read.The only flaw was the pace of the story.I personally feel the buildup was a little too long in certain places.On the whole it was a worthwhile read. Hope to get more from you.
by
Anonymous04/22/07
Awsome
Awsome story, actually one of the best i read in a while. But a little something bugged me, how can they be twins if one is 18 and the other is 16 ? or maybe i missread something :)
Keep up the good work
by
Anonymous06/01/07
fuckin a!
god damn man i wish i could write as well as u. this cummin from an author. great story man. kudos, keep it up
by
Anonymous06/25/07
One long, fantastic story!!!!
I was amazed at the story, and especially how long it went; it took me three attempts to get through it, of course having to stop for certain reasons. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!!!
by
Anonymous07/07/07
WOW
Incredible story......don;t change a thing!
by
Anonymous07/12/07
Very good story
Over all a good read, well explained & not leaving questions like most stories seem to!
by
Anonymous07/15/07
Loved it...absolutly loved it.
This story had me dripping for days. I even tried the harness. It was out of this world. Can't wait to read more from you.
by
Anonymous07/26/07
Creaming and Cumming
Nicely written and had me creaming and cumming throughout it. Well Done!
by
Anonymous08/21/07
Very Hot!
I love brother/sister incest. Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous09/18/07
HOLY SHIT!!!
that story was un-fucking believable! Let the good times roll on.
English
Wonderful
Perhaps a little on the long side, but wow, what a hot story. Loved how Mom was persuaded, an all-round great story. Thanks.
Hot and hotter
Started off with excitement then got better and then better still. Hope to hear and read more of this threesome.
HELL YES
have you fucked lisa's ass yet thats what i wanna know
way too ...........
long for a single submission this should have been 3 or 4 parts. didn't finish it because it is too looooooong to read in one sitting.
thanks for giving us a whole story,and not teasing
i think most writers have mindlaps and can't write but one chapter at a time.thanks for giving us a story we can sit down and enjoy.teasing stories suck and why not write it down at one time.your fans will be waiting for your next story,see we read it more than once.that to really enjoy the sexual overtures.thanks for a story you can now and not have to wait weeks or months to finish reading.
W.O.W!
`One of the hottest Lit stories EVER. (And I'm a gay woman!)
A little long, but it doesn't lose it's intensity.
This was one of those stories that comes along at Lit once in a while, that I have to read through no matter how long it takes, and makes me cum a number of times and I just end up coming back for more...
Very hot story, and I thought it was great that the mom was seduced into things near the end, while the guy and his sis were getting off together and enjoying the voyeuristic, teasing relationship with mother. I'll be watching out for more stories from samslam in the future.
-Capt
excellent cocksucking!
I've only read the first 4 pages of the story - he's teasing her by licking her slit for every 2 minutes of cocksucking - mmmmmmmmmmmmm amazing!!
Two cocks up!
I echo "TheCaptain"'s comments below. Amazingly hot story. Looking forward to more.
Thank you.
WOnDERFUL
Loved your story. I was wishing I had a story like this to tell about my sister. We had some fun, but nothing like this. I hope you will continue writing. Enjoyed it very much.
Amazing
This story was one of the best stories ever!!!! You must write more incest stories!!!
Amazing
That was simply amazing Story...We want MORE!
nobody mentioned...
...your use of first person was really irratating, but the over steam heat of the story made up for most of the editing problems. A good editor would be your next move. Just...very VERY hot story! The kind that makes the incest catagory sexier than any other. Good show for a first time...but find that editor. You won't regret it.
Greater than the Greaterst...
You Rock...
Keep rocking..
Absolutely Fantastic
This is what good erotica should be: slowly increasing tension, lots of resistance, strongly defined characters and a twist or two.
Keep up the excellent work, samslam, and thank you for your efforts.
Fine Story
A but long. I'd have liked it better if it were in several chapters rather thsn one non-stop story.
The first part, just brother and sister was simply top notch. The addition of Mom -- in my view -- was a detriment. And -- again in my view -- when Mom did get involved, it might have been better with some reticence on her part, and her having to be slowly seduced, step by step, rather than having her jump in with no real qualms at all.
Fantastic!
There's a reason this is on the Top Stories list. Everything about this story is top notch. Though it could've been cut into chapters, that would ruin its high rating :)
A+!
Great Story
I am glad you didn't break it into chapters. I read it from start to finish. Great job.
Top notch!!!
Screw the unsatisfied nit-picker who claims you need an editor. This is one of the finest stories I've read on this site. An instant classic regardless of the wanna-be lit professor's comments. Truly high art of the most erotic style.
UNREAL
The best storie i've ever read here.......AWSOME
Great Stuff
Great Stuff, My Friend...
Keep Posting and Cumming.
Thanks for the post. I'll always be looking for a story from you.
Erotic Adventure
Exceptional story with continued anticipation as to what innocent erotic adventure will they encounter next.
OMG!!
Oh, my FUCKING GOD!!!!!
That story was amazing.
Well done on a top read!
It Doesn't Get Any Better!
This is one of the best I've ever read. Thanks for sharing your outstanding story telling talent with us and please keep writing.
Fuck....
FUCK!
thats gotta be the best thing I ever read, you've made this pervert very happy :) .
Wow!
Had to ride my vibe TWICE during this nugget! Well done!
Couldn't Stop Reading...
It's late and I should be in bed, but I couldn't stop reading 'til the end of this awsome story. Two cokes, a piece of cheesecake and 3 orgasms later and I'm a very satisfied reader. If only my life were as good as this story.. I could die a happy man right now. Very well done. Keep 'em coming!
Size does matter!
Excellent work, the dynamic between latent attraction, fantasy and relationship worked really well for you. I often find when stories branch out from the central core, in this case the Jack/Lisa attraction, that the theme gets tacky. This sadly was also the case with "My Virgin Sister", dragging the mother into the relationship seemed like overextending good materiale. Likewise the sale of blowjob lessons wasn't convincing and the transition from learning experience to relationship was a bit quick.
Never the less this story definitely deserves the top placing it has. Thank you for your hard work.
Oh. My. Fucking. Ghawd.
Jesus. H. Macy.
That has got to be one of, if not THE, BEST stories I have ever read on this or any user-submitted erotica site.
Kudos.
WOW!
Loved the story. The sex was phenom. I happened to be reading this at work, and I had to go in the bathroom for a bit of private time...But I can't WAIT to get home and get a good fuck from my vibrator.
Possible, but really wild
Incredibly hot and wild.
mmmmmmmm
First four chapters were ooohhh sooo very hot...then it was kinda routine, but involving mom was not really very convincing. Anywayzzz I fingered myself 3-4 times during the period I was reading it...could not leave it in the middle.
Where was my sister when I was that age.
unbelievable, I couldn't stop reading it. Jack was one lucky SOB...literally!
Excellant
I agree with prior statements...Where was my sis back then? Maybe if I had read that....?
Anymore chapters forthcumming to this will be gladly read, BEFORE anything else.
Amazing
I loved it, so detailed and hot. keep this up and you could make a novel
Just About Perfect.....
Thanks very much for making my day!
Things to consider:
1) Very good pacing and generally believable until Lisa walks into Mom's bedroom to begin the setup. The Mom experience could have been contained in a follow-on story with the same intense buildup and detail as this story. It was just "too easy" for her to immediately have sex with BOTH of her kids.
2) The title is not really appropriate; so much more than a one-time virginity session. No hymen, multiple orgasms, and I Love You's the very first time? In the great majority of female experiences (forgetting the incest), it just doesn't happen (and rightly so).
When I read the existing comments, I am sure they will appreciate your efforts as much as I did.
Dixiebullfrog
hot and lovely
I actually love long stories but this one was so hot, i never noticed it was so many pages!... Great pacing, wonderful characterization and very plausible!... Thanks.
so wet
just reading this stroy got me so so wet and i just could not stop playing with myself i no its wronge but it feels so right really wish i could get fucked like jack did lisa
THE BEST *****
THE BEST NEED MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Perfect
One of the best stories I have ever read!
A good article
This is one of the better articles I have read.The only flaw was the pace of the story.I personally feel the buildup was a little too long in certain places.On the whole it was a worthwhile read. Hope to get more from you.
Awsome
Awsome story, actually one of the best i read in a while. But a little something bugged me, how can they be twins if one is 18 and the other is 16 ? or maybe i missread something :)
Keep up the good work
fuckin a!
god damn man i wish i could write as well as u. this cummin from an author. great story man. kudos, keep it up
One long, fantastic story!!!!
I was amazed at the story, and especially how long it went; it took me three attempts to get through it, of course having to stop for certain reasons. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!!!
WOW
Incredible story......don;t change a thing!
Very good story
Over all a good read, well explained & not leaving questions like most stories seem to!
Loved it...absolutly loved it.
This story had me dripping for days. I even tried the harness. It was out of this world. Can't wait to read more from you.
Creaming and Cumming
Nicely written and had me creaming and cumming throughout it. Well Done!
Very Hot!
I love brother/sister incest. Keep up the good work.
HOLY SHIT!!!
that story was un-fucking believable! Let the good times roll on.
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