short, sweet and to the poetic point (~_~) nice write blue!
Tears, kisses, & smiles
Quite the lethal combination.
Short, sweet and evocotive.
This is really nice. :)
this poem touched me
Yes, this one touches every nerve, lol.
I love the lines:
unbraid the coils in us
~~ there's magic speaking in those few words.
Great images and a very heartfelt read here.
Thank you Blue for touching that spot of love
in all of us with this one ~
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